Ok John you have to admit she looks like she packin something down there.

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saber4734

have to agree with saber on that one.

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I think the problem is the highlight on the crotch is placed incorrectly. If you place it higher (or get rid of it completely), it won't look so much like the telltale bulge that comes off as a bit more... masculine. And you don't need so much detail on her clothing there either, in fact, I'd say you could probably lose all the lines for those folds and the image would be better off. You suggest more detail there than anywhere else on the character's form, which is why it draws attention in the wrong way.

Everything else about the figure looks solid though. Although I have to say arm raised, wrist twisted probably isn't a natural way for her left arm (right hand side) to be placed, whether she just got slammed against the wall or if she were just sitting there. She'd more likely be using that arm to support herself as she was getting up, so it would be lower.

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Sexy work here looks very niiice

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I belive in Jesus Christ,Word up yo.

Very nice.

Psst... keep quiet about the crotch bulge, you're giving away secrets.

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Shh! You're not supposed to have noticed that yet.

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Great work, and I'm glad you did your homework about the crotch issue.

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You just messin with me or are you serious? I mean is she really a guy or what?

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saber4734